trying for mod.

[dasuke]

Name-Amanda
Job Wanted-Mod
How Often Are You On?-Often
How Many Characters Do You Have?-4

[SoulofDarkness]

ok, so me or la is gonna put a scenario where people r breaking the rules, and u have 2 determine what rules they are breaking, blah blah and all that. sound good?

[dasuke]

yup lol i think i can get this lol

[SoulofDarkness]

k ill give it a whirl

My stallion watched the water flow by peacefully, he loved his land already. He walks over to his lead mare and bites her, tasting the blood as it flows freely. Then he laughed madly and kicked her, watching her leg bend and break under the blow. "Oops," he says sarcastically, "Did I do that?"

I walk into the land with my head held high, and seeing the abuse I can't help myself. I gallop up to the two and lunge at the stallion, wringing his neck with my sharp teeth. Then I kicked him and finally tackled him to the ground and ripped his throat out. After I finish, I look up to the injured mare. "Are you okay?" I ask, and she smiles at me and said, "I am fine."


The lead mare watched the newcomer with interest, the pain in her leg throbbing. She tried to stand, but tripped and fell on her face. "Thanks for the help."

(sorry if its a little hard to follow, this is my first time at something like this. when you are explaining what they did wrong, please address them by color. Also include which posted the best, and note that some may not have broken any rules)

[dasuke]

RED-didn't post in third person past tense and didn't give blue a chance to fight back
GREEN- didn't post in third person past tense,god moded blue and didn't give red a chance to fight back.
BLUE-didn't break any rules.

[SoulofDarkness]

good, u got it all. i approve, what about u LA?

[Thorn]

~!*APPROVED*!~